3 Comments:

 Jesse C. said...

At first glance the second frame looks like the bear took the trap off. i think you can tell the trap is still on though... Maybe if the talk balloon was in a different spot... Maybe its not a big deal though...

February 26, 2011 at 2:07 AM  

 Daniel Chaffin said...

Let's see... the bear is supposed to be in the process of taking the trap off. I think I will move the balloon though, so that you can tell that the white blob in the trap is the rabbit's leg. I didn't cut the pages down to the trim size, so that might make a bit of difference on this one.

March 1, 2011 at 2:36 PM  

 Jesse C. said...

Well, I guess the ambiguity about whether or not the trap is still on the foot is fine if it is in the process of coming off anyway. Maybe you don't need to bother.

March 2, 2011 at 3:42 PM  

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